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@@ -16,10 +16,8 @@ Lighting Designer | Software Engineer | Nerd
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-	As a self-proclaimed perfectionist, I’ve learned to harness this trait to my advantage—valuing preparation over
-	improvisation and precision over guesswork. My attention to detail ensures that every cue, fixture, and system
-	performs exactly as intended. I bring professionalism, technical expertise, and a deep commitment to elevating every
-	production I work on, blending methodical planning with a love for creative problem-solving.
+	A perfectionist by nature, I value preparation, attention to detail, and reliability while staying flexible and
+	collaborative to meet the demands of live production.
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